Please comment what you think of the first draft of my video below
Insert focus group on first draft
Looking at the feedback provided for my media courswork, I believe there are still changes to be made. I think that definitely some of the shots need to be improved, such as the editing and pace of the skateboarding scenes as well as possible colour effects.
I also believe that for the video to be taken seriously, there shouldn't be any drug taking in it. Even though it's conventional for the genre, I believe that it should possibly be just drinking rather than drug taking. That being said, the main reason for the police chase is because he found some drugs dropped by a member of our band, so that needs to be taken into consideration.
There could also be a better opening sequence than the current one and more shots of the band playing.
After taking my audience research into account, the video was edited and updated accordingly; here is my final music video.
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